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Jinn Storm

Rob

Date: Sunday, 2008-07-06, 11:31 Am | Message # 1

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Name: Jinn Storm
Age: 17
Hometown: the Red Hawks base
Occupation: Pickpocket
Weapon of Choice: Daggers of any kind
Background Story:
Jinn, a pickpocket in the large city, Meltokio. Jinn always had it bad with the law ever since he was born. Growing up he lived in an orphanage, usually by himself. He was always the "troublemaker" being caught with stealing, fighting, pulling pranks, and other crude things. Once he turned 17 he ran away from the orphanage to live life on his own, "They were going to throw me out of that filthy place at 18 anyway." Jinn always said. He was always on the move until one day a couple of people stood in his way. He found out they were called, the Red Hawks, an elite mercenary group. He asked what they wanted and a man stepped forward saying, "We don't want anything from ya'. Get outta of are way or we'll just have'ta make ya'." After hearing those words Jinn got angry, being the hothead he is. "If ya' wanna get through, you'll have tao get through me!" The man said, "Woah, tough words for a shimp like you. Well, I warned ya'." Immediately, Jinn rushed at the man taking out a dagger from his belt strap and sliced at his neck. The man fell back and felt the gash at his neck and said, "Holy shit, this kid's fast. We could use someone like him on our side eh?" Ever since then Jinn has been with the Red Hawks, he's one of the top members too. He's always ready for a fight, and always prepared for death.

Heh, this is realllllllly choppy. I'm not gonna fix it though, since you basically get it.
I did this for fun mainly, because I haven't in ages.

Message edited by Rob - Sunday, 2008-07-06, 11:32 Am

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Date: Tuesday, 2008-07-08, 1:29 Pm | Message # 2

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Date: Tuesday, 2008-07-08, 8:38 Pm | Message # 3

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Name: Jinn Storm
Age: 17
Hometown: the Red Hawks base
Occupation: Pickpocket
Weapon of Choice: Daggers of any kind
Background Story:
Jinn, a pickpocket in the large city, Meltokio. Jinn always had it bad with the law ever since he was born. Growing up he lived in an orphanage, usually by himself. He was always the "troublemaker" being caught with stealing, fighting, pulling pranks, and other crude things. Once he turned 17 he ran away from the orphanage to live life on his own, "They were going to throw me out of that filthy place at 18 anyway." Jinn always said. He was always on the move until one day a couple of people stood in his way. He found out they were called, the Red Hawks, an elite mercenary group. He asked what they wanted and a man stepped forward saying, "We don't want anything from ya'. Get outta of are way or we'll just have'ta make ya'." After hearing those words Jinn got angry, being the hothead he is. "If ya' wanna get through, you'll have tao get through me!" The man said, "Woah, tough words for a shimp like you. Well, I warned ya'." Immediately, Jinn rushed at the man taking out a dagger from his belt strap and sliced at his neck. The man fell back and felt the gash at his neck and said, "Holy shit, this kid's fast. We could use someone like him on our side eh?" Ever since then Jinn has been with the Red Hawks, he's one of the top members too. He's always ready for a fight, and always prepared for death.

Heh, this is realllllllly choppy. I'm not gonna fix it though, since you basically get it.
I did this for fun mainly, because I haven't in ages.

Copypasta

Overrall nice, I couldn't do it better. happy